评委:
Editing – cut on the action – you tended to repeat it, especially the first cut (at the door).Really strange cut at 2:20 – when he hands her the blanket.Some struggles about lighting/shooting; Strong common themes.
剪辑——按动作剪辑——你喜欢重复这种做法,尤其是第一次(在门那儿的)剪辑。2:20的剪切真的很奇怪——就是在他把毯子递给她的时候。有些地方的打光/拍摄存在问题。强有力的引人共情的常用题材。
评委:
Very well done. Nice lighting and composition.
拍得很不错,打光和构图都不错。
评委:
wasn't expecting English speakers and a film in English. Interesting look - in places it felt a little overexposed. Also some shot matching issues througout e.g. 2:15 actress on couch where color temp/look felt like it changed. I thought the actress was excellent.
没想到会遇到讲英语的团队和一部英语电影。风格很有意思——有些地方感觉有些过曝。全片有几处有镜头匹配问题,比如2:15女演员在沙发上,色温/风格好像有变。我觉得女演员很棒。